Term 2 writing sample

I am learning to:

1. Make my writing interesting by using describing words

2. Attempt to use capital letters and full-stops by myself

Success criteria:

I will know I can successfully do this when my writing shows

1. One or more Adjectives that match my picture

2.

• A capital letter at the start of my story and at the beginning of each new sentence.
•  A full-stop at the end of each of my ideas and at the end of my story.

Next steps:
1. Re-read my writing to make sure that all the words I need are there and take out any words that I don't need.
2. Use a full-stop at the end of each idea.

Student comment:
I think I'm good at putting capital letters at the start.
I think I should practice doing whole words.