ANZAC Writing

WALT retell the events of ANZAC day.                                                                                                   I learned that the World War one stared in1914.
I achieved my goal because I learned about ANZAC day.
Next time I will make my story longer.
Here are some of my best sentences.

On the 25th of April 1914 World War One started.
The New Zealanders and Australians arrived on the wrong side of the beach.
The kiwis and diggers were getting shot as well as the British Empire including New Zealand.

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